Greetings, Cobe !

My name is Lady Cubbyella and I am one of the sly foxes from the House of Florent.

Title: Again

First Impression: I liked this! Being raised a Catholic, it was easy to picture the scene. And I loved the witty ending, too.

What needs your attention: It could just be me, but the word glanced doesn't feel like the right word for the thought of buying another lock glanced through his mind in the very first paragraph. Maybe flashed or something similar.

What part I liked best: I really enjoyed the humor in this piece between Father and Georgina... especially when he was asking God a question as he looked upward toward the ceiling, unaware the woman was on the balcony, and then she answered him in a deep voice and played a few keys on the organ. It all made me smile.

Overall impression: I enjoyed the situation you presented, along with the humor. And the ending was perfect. Nice work, Cobe!

Thank you for allowing me to read your work. It has been my pleasure.

Have a great day and...
  K e e p on W r i t i n g !

Cubby ")

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