Title of Work: : Coconut Lotion (XGC, Erotica)
Author of Work: : TeaGarden
Date: : July 19

Plot:
A woman goes on vacation and ends up at a "clothing optional" beach.

Scene/Setting:
The Author has decided to take a vacation at the beach for a week, to get over the craziness of her divorce. It is winter but the weather is still warm where she is. For the first few days she stays in the motel room. One the third day she is told by the concierge of a "clothing optional" beach. She goes and lays out her blanket, gets undressed and relishes in the feeling of freedom she gets. She falls asleep. She is woken up by a young couple, not much different in age than herself. The woman agrees to put lotion on her back. While the husband watches, the woman starts on the author's back, but slowly drops her hands lower and lower. After going all the way down to her legs the woman comes back up and spends a lot of time on her ass. The Author turns over and the woman starts putting lotion on the front of the Author, rubbing her breast and then between her legs. The woman asks if the Author would be willing to suck on the husband and she agrees. There is nice three way going. The Author and husband go over the top. It is not stated if the wife does, but I would be willing to guess, she does.

Characters:
Author
Woman
Husband

Suggestions:
This was a very well written piece. I had no problem seeing what was happening. Even though the woman had a lot of suntan lotion on, I think you might want to state she didn't fall asleep for wrong. Sometimes in the winter, at the beach you can get a worse tan then the summer time.

Character Count: 1,407 (tags = 173 Characters above this point)
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