Doses and Over [13+] The misuse of pills. |
A Review from "Simply Positive Review Forum " ! What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port? I am the judge for today in "The Writer's Cramp" . Thanks for entering! What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item? Your fine free verse poem deals with the ravages and lures of prescription medication. If a little does some good, why not take more? the logic of that can be very alluring when one is loopy and in pain. What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item? I thought it was all brilliant, especially this part! "that pills aplenty would suffice to oust unwanted maladies like marshals did in days of Dodge, like conflicts utilizing guns in corrals (not so OK) rife with lead " I could readily identify with this as I am starting a new medicine myself, which has to be blood tested periodically and monitored so it doesn't do me in. I think you did a great job with the prompt and with the writing of your poem. Bravo! HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps PUBLIC SERVICE ANNOUNCEMENT I am not an expert on poetry or prose or much else. I am merely a reader who loves to read. If I send a review, it means I enjoyed my reading experience enough to let you know it. I travel to many galaxies and pick my reading carefully, just as I pick my hay carefully. END OF PUBLIC SERVICE ANNOUNCEMENT Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time.... "Avoiding Toothless Rabid Bullies & Such" My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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