Hi Whiskerfaceschoolsout! ,

A "Game of Thrones"  House Martell Review!

First impression:

This is a great list of suggestions for the use of a pencil - an inspirational prompt brought to WDC from the mind of Fran, the Master of Plans

General impression:

Your list includes a nice mix of serious and humorous suggestions.

Judging by your list you have clearly given some serious thought to compiling your list, but have also taken the challenge in the tongue-in-cheek spirit that it was intended.

I'm glad you remembered to include the obvious uses of write, print, and draw. I saw someone else's list a while ago (can't remember who now), and they had missed off draw!

Favourite suggestions:

The idea of giving it a name, throwing it a party, and having your photo taken with it are just brilliant. I like the concept of personifying the object in these and a few other suggestions I saw.

Use it to rewind a cassette - I just had to laugh when I read this. I was a child of the 80s, and there was many a time I used a pencil in this fashion - usually after my cassette had been chewed to pieces by my Walkman.

Talk to it and tell people it's sentient - this is one example of the light-hearted suggestions from your list, and I love the idea of pulling this prank off on someone.

Suggestions:

You state in your description that this is for one of the Coffeehouse challenges, but I'd suggest that you include a link to the forum somewhere. That way other members who stumble across this will be able to find details as to what this activity was about.

I'd also suggest considering adding a cover image or some colour/images to the actual list. It would make your list that little bit more eye catching.

Thank you for sharing your work with us! Write On!


Lord Andy~Sunspear of Martell




My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .