Hello janetd . How are you doing? Welcome to WDC! I'm Charlie. Thanks for sharing your writing with us. I hope this review finds you well.


Title/General Thoughts/Subject Matter: This is a sweet and positive poem that was a great read. I don't typically enjoy inspirational stuff too much, but the imagery used and word choices made this well worth the read. You definitely have a strong control of poetic technique and that came across clearly in this poem.


What Worked: I love the way this poem built toward the last line. It was all about telling something, but we didn't know what was being told while we were reading. When it got to the end, I thought that was cute and worth the wait. My favorite part was the descriptions used and also the flow. Rhyming poetry isn't typically my cup of tea, but the rhymes here didn't feel forced at all. My favorite lines:

The image of the landscape
Kissed by the morning dew

Beautiful imagery!


Technical Issues/Suggestions: There were some technical issues with spelling here. A couple examples:

And the ticking of it's source
It's should be its

The canvass filled with colors
Canvass should be canvas


Final Thoughts: Overall, I thought this was beautifully written and I loved the descriptions of imagery that brought it to life. I think there is a bit of room for improvement with spelling/grammar. Thanks again for sharing with us!


Best wishes,





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