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Review by ♥Hooves♥
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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Hey Kanish ~ we got this! ! What's shaking?



What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Cow* You visited me recently with a nice review, so I meandered over and am perusing your G.o.T. folder and found this gem about a cowboy who doesn't quite fit in.

What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea*This is one mixed up cowpoke. Well, he is really a time traveling, futuristic fellow, who likes to keep it low key. That sounds smart in a volatile situation, such as where he finds himself in this engaging tale.

I liked his insecurities and his summoned up machismo to face the challenges of the western saloon.

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

*Thumbsup* There is a 1939 movie I saw recently that this brought to mind. It is called "Destry Rides Again" and it has James Stewart playing the Bagota part and Marlena Dietrich playing the sassy dangerous dancehall gal.

This was my favorite part as it made me howl and moo:

"Oh Mother,” he exclaimed, as he rolled all around holding his ear.
“I ainch your mother, son,” she said, before slapping her again."

You should check out that movie if you haven't seen it because I think you would enjoy it. Marlena Dietrich is in command of the whole thing, like your Rachel seems to be. I loved loved loved the futuristic angle at the end.

I thought it was imaginative, clever and brilliant at times. Well done my friend!


HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

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