I read this and had multiple mental images flash through my mind. At first I'm seeing two teenagers in the back of a truck watching the night sky, looking for falling stars.

Then I saw two kids strolling down a well lit street.

You did well to give me mental images, to pull me in.

You have 'see' and 'seen' at the end of two lines, right after each other. I would suggest possibly changing the seen. Just a thought.

The ridiculous shoes made me wonder if it was a male or female that had them, careful there. ha ha ha

Tomorrow didn't sound at all difficult.
Thanks for sharing.
love, LinnAnn