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Review of In My Sleep  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Wow. You stuck to the syllable format very well. I'm impressed. lol I don't know if I've seen this style before.

I like how each of your 10 syllable lines rhyme. Your poem touched my heart, thinking about the tenderness with which the adult child remembers her mother. Mom will probably hover even through the next generation. Stories mom tells the children will keep the then grandmother alive for another generation.
Thanks for sharing.
love, LinnAnn

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