Hi RavenAmor , A "Game of Thrones" House Martell Review! A Review from "Simply Positive Review Forum " ! First impressions: You have done a great job of turning your list of required words into an engaging poem. Form: Your poem is written in free verse, set out in five quatrains. Although your stanzas do not have any fixed meter, rhyme, or syllable count, I do love that you have included other poetic devices such as alliteration, consonance and assonance. General impressions: Your poem has a smooth flow to it. Assonance creates a soft tone, and alliteration helps to maintain the smooth flow. You also make effective use hyperbole to get your point across. Line by line suggestions: These are included in the dropnote below. Your original work is in black, specific suggestions are in indigo, and additional notes/explanations for the change are in orange. Line by line suggestions ▼ Thank you for sharing your work with us! Write On! Lord Andy~Sunspear of Martell ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **
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