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Review of Frankenstein Finds Love at Last

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions. This review was done for the Game of Crowns contest.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

While you did not touch every fairy tale there are quite a few of the more common ones to make a very plausible story line.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

I often wondered about what happened to all those great characters when they are not into the little tales we read our children. what are the true lives behind these characters. In today's society there television goes behind the camera to see the day to day lives of people this story fits right in.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

I am sure that with a little effort this story could be expanded upon to include many more airy tale characters.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

Thank you for the story and I think you should have ended it with "They lived happily ever after.


dblameck


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