Hi Starling ,I found your writing as part of a challenge. Hopefully this review will find you in good spirit.

What a strange little story this is. I am a bit confused at finishing reading this work. What have I been reading just now? It's the story of an employee who is asked by her three bosses to find a key under the bed. She has a crush on all three of them so she is more than willing to participate.

What works for me? All three men frowned at the same time, like someone had hit a button on a computer and changed the picture.
It is a funny description, it made me chuckle.

What questions I have? When she saw the men looking at her as if she was the most beautiful woman in the world, the darkness took over and she fell to the floor. A little bit pathetic and I am not sure if this is a reason to faint. The ending is a therefore a bit confusing. Is it a proper ending? Maybe you should look at it again.

All in all en weird story about a strange girl with a crush. But maybe that's the secret to this story that you are doing strange things and behave strangely when you have a crush on (usually) someone and in this case three men.

Your writing style is appealing though, the pace is good, swift and clear. I am looking forward to reading some other stories.

Keep up the good work, enjoy writing!

WakeUpAndLive