Hi the scribe ,I found your writing ad random. Hopefully this review will find you in good spirit.

What a charming little tale this is about finding your spouse after braking up with the ex-boyfriend. The story is light and airy and has a good feel about it. Your writing style is pleasant and plot, setting and action are okay. It's just that you are telling the reader a story in stead of showing it. But the descriptions are good.

What i like? As time went on I realized that Kenny was the one for me, scruffy clothes or not. I decided instead of nagging I would try something different. So, when I was getting ready to go out one Saturday evening, I made a real effort, lots of make-up, a long flowing maxi skirt and little halter neck top. The type of outfit I would usually reserve for nightclubs.


You wanted to make your point about the scruffy clothes and do so by not nagging instead you came up with a great solution...that didn't really work either. I had to smile about you trying and him not picking up on it. That's men for you!

But in the end you realized it didn't matter what he looked like, he was the one for you anyway. I loved that acknowledgment. 42 years later you have been prove right about him and the two of you.

All in all a very nice write and read, thanks for sharing this story.

Keep up the good work, enjoy writing!

WakeUpAndLive