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 Consequence  [XGC]
When sex becomes something more. severe. not for everyone
by MD Maurice
Review of Consequence  
Review by dblameck (David)
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Rated: XGC | (4.0)
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Review of Consequence

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions. This review was done for the Game of Crowns contest.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

A scenario with two people who do not live together but come together for some BDSM flavoured sexual action. She is the submissive and he is the dominant. It starts with a cell phone call and she knows who it is and has second thoughts about answering it but having the submissive nature she really has no choice.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

Melanie is the submissive who having been in the bar drinking tequila and is somewhat intoxicated. She does not want this episode to happen but does not have the will to stop it.

Stave is the dominant who feeds on Melanie's weakness. The story gives a sense that Steve is probably married. He also enjoys causing pain and likes rough sex.

It is interesting that they never kiss or are involved in any normal romantic gestures.

Good descriptive sexual action and I enjoyed the feeling that are expressed.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

A well written story of sexual action between this couple.

dblameck


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