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Review of Blink!  
Review by ~ Aqua ~
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello, Cassie Kat ! I am Aqua and the following are only my personal opinions. Ultimately, you and only you can decide what works best for your item.


When I last came to your portfolio, I read your blinks and was very impressed by each and every one of them. When I was searching for someone to review again for WDC Game of Thrones, your portfolio came to my mind as I wanted to know and read more of your blinks and here I am!

I have noticed that you title your stories in a very unique manner. They seem very simple on the first read but then the reader finds that there is something very deep, something hidden, a bigger meaning inside it. I found this feature in this blink as well as all the others I had read before. The title of your story was good, it made the reader wonder who was gone for mattress shopping and the reader had no idea what kind of an even might take place during it.

The story you have is quite good and perfect for the prompt you have here! Another thing I have noticed is the very interesting prompts you find and write on. I don't think these are prompts of any contest here on WDC, are they? If you don't mind, can you tell me where you find prompts like these?

The plot you have here is captivating, the reader is immediately hooked as she reads the prompt and wonders what thing the couple might be discussing in an implicit and vague manner. When I was finished with the story, there were a lot of ideas in my mind for what they might be discussing about like maybe the two of them want to move forward in their relationship, Rena wants a child but Chris is a bit hesitant. Another idea that came to my mind was that perhaps Rena want to move in together but Chris is afraid to take a step and likes being where he is whereas Rena tells him the thrill and the fun in trying new things. A perfect approach on the prompt!

I had only one suggestion for your work. Feel free to ignore it if you disagree.

==>But maybe your right.
But maybe you're right.

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