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Hello, Cassie Kat ! I am Aqua and the following are only my personal opinions. Ultimately, you and only you can decide what works best for your item.


What a sad, twisted story you have here. I was searching for another item to review when I thought of reading this one. The title of your work caught my attention because it was unique and I wanted to know what kind of an art exhibition it was and what will happen there. Reading the words ''artist's exhibition" gave the impression of one character being the artist and perhaps he is admiring pieces of art in the gallery. The title of your story is perfect and suits with the story itself.

The reader is drawn int your story from the very beginning because the way it is written gave the reader the impression that perhaps the main character isn't too fond of Art and it is nothing more than papers, sheets and musicians and the character was surprised himself to see he had come there. It made the reader all the more intrigued to see what kind of a character you have here and who exactly is this Jess whose work he has come to see and admire.

I was confused about Frank's character to be honest. I mean he thought to himself that the painting was good, elegant and tasteful because she made it, then why did he say the opposite to her? Was he there to get her worked up and angry on purpose?

Other than that, the characters you have are very unique and interesting. Frank likes facts and figures, he doesn't want to face anything that cannot be explained scientifically including emotions and love but Jess on the other hand loves art, a person who is moved by her emotions than thoughts. They seem like complete opposites but the reader gets to know that they had a past as a couple but then had broken up. What a sad story, I wish Frank would have said what he really thought instead of saying the opposite.

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