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 A Thousand Years Of Snow  [E]
A poem about a snow-covered heart waiting to be melted away...
by mARi☠StressedAtWork
Review by ~ Aqua ~
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello, mARi☠StressedAtWork ! I am Aqua and the following are only my personal opinions. Ultimately, you and only you can decide what works best for your item.


The last time I was here, I really enjoyed reading your work and wanted to read more of it and here I am! I was in your blue poetry folder when I saw the poems that you wanted reviews for. Out of those poems, this one caught my attention because of the touching and unique title of your poem. The title was mysterious for the reader as she tried to make sense of it. It did not give anything away to the reader. The short description explained a little to the reader as to what it may be about and therefore, it had the reader intrigued, especially the terms 'snow-covered heart waiting to be melted away' really appealed to me!

You have a very deep poem here that confuses the reader the first time when she reads it. I had to read the poem again in order to confirm the idea I got when I read it the first time. My interpretation of your poem was that the character in your poem had lost her loved one and was heartbroken and depressed. Now the character is rejoicing, looking towards the light, the brighter side of things because she is going to die soon as well and be together with her lover who died before her.

The flow of your poem was very beautiful and the rhythm was there when I read your poem out loud which enhanced your poem for the reader and appealed to her. The stanza I really liked from your poem were the fourth and the fifth ones, they were written beautifully, full of pain.

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