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 Falling Angels  [E]
a poem about falling in love again after suffering from a past heartache...
by mARi☠StressedAtWork
Review of Falling Angels  
Review by ~ Aqua ~
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello, mARi☠StressedAtWork ! I am Aqua and the following are only my personal opinions. Ultimately, you and only you can decide what works best for your item.


Well, there are two major reasons why I decided to read and review this work of yours. The first one is that I completely love angels and falling angels! I have read a lot of novels and stories about it and am completely addicted to anything that features them! Therefore, when I read the title of your poem, I knew I had to read it. Then I read the short description which was very touching and little different from what I had imagined the poem would be about the title. It was very touching, emotional and the reader wanted to know more about the pain and the heartache.

What a beautiful poem you have here, Mari! I really liked it! Getting over your past love can be a hard thing but at the same time, it brings new love, new opportunities and the one you got made you happy and be a different person, look at things with a new perspective, I am very happy to read a happy ending in this poem! Only in the end does the reader realise why you named the title the way it is and it is perfect, it fits the poem completely. The flow of your poem was perfect, there was no interruption and it was smooth when I read it out loud, there was no interruption. The rhythm and the flow were enhanced even more by the presence of the consistent rhyming scheme used throughout the entire poem. The idea in your poem for hope, a new beginning was expressed beautifully! I liked the entire poem but I really liked the third, fourth and fifth stanza, they were absolutely beautiful and they touched me a lot! *Heart*

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