Hello! Sharon

I just read your poem “When Fish Fly”. The beautiful nature picture you painted here makes me reading your poem from the beginning to the end. I can imagine a river where some fisherman busy to catch flying salmon fish. Where an eagle swoops down to catch the salmons fish.

I like the imaginary of this poem. I love poetry and I write too. I've enjoyed reading your poetry.

Here you have used punctuation marks where needed. I like the lines
We all know, fish don’t fly, they just swim,
But the salmon is confused, it's no lie.
Thrashing fish, churning waves upon the water
Swim upstream, just to spawn, then they die.

Thank you for sharing your awesome work with us.


These are my thoughts and ideas alone. Best of luck with all of your writing.

Happy Writing!

Mina  


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