Greetings, K Renée (on the road)!

My name is Lady Cubbyella and I am one of the sly foxes from the House of Florent.

Title: Pinocchio

First Impression: Oh, wow! You must be a published poet, I have little doubt. If you aren't, you should be! I read through several of your fairy tale poems and was amazed at your talent.

What needs your attention: If something needs attention, I am not seeing it. I'm still floating from your flow of words and imagery. Nice work!

What part I liked best: In your fifth stanza, the first three lines:
Truth, you say, is freedom (oh, and key
to disillusionment and pain); lies
are a dungeon’s bars and chains
Wow, wow, wow. I love this!

Overall impression: Just so you know, I normally write poetry for children, so this is way over the top of my writing style! You certainly are gifted and if you haven't sent anything in to be published, I hope you do because your writing needs to be read and appreciated by many.

Thank you for allowing me to read your work. It has been my pleasure.

Have a great day and...
  K e e p on W r i t i n g !

Cubby ")

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