Greetings, jaya!

My name is Lady Cubbyella and I am one of the sly foxes from the House of Florent.

Title:
Come gently, oh, garland of clouds

First Impression: How lovely! Your imagery swims in my mind, of getting lost in the lap of nature's surrounds. **sigh** If only we could really do this, think how relaxing it would be, along with nurturing.

What needs your attention: Nary a thing. Great job!

What part I liked best: I want to snuggle up to a cloud after reading this! I love these lines:
lost in the slopes and sounds
of a golden dream of destiny
I also like the part where you ask the sailing clouds to give you a moment with your love before it rains. Very nice, indeed!

Overall impression: This is such a feel-good piece of poetry. There's nothing like the arms of nature to nurture us!

Thank you for allowing me to read your work. It has been my pleasure.

Have a great day and...
  K e e p on W r i t i n g !

Cubby ")

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