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| Review brought to you by: "Game of Thrones" by Gaby ~ Just tired  PLOT - Bree resents her grandparents, especially her cousin Rick and lives up to her black sheep status. Being pissed at them drives her to break into their home and ransack the place, taking the expensive things she can pawn for money. SETTING - Good visuals as Bree went through the house. I could picture the family photos and her grandfather waiting with the knife. The fight scene was vivid, and very sad as well. CHARACTERS - Bree, who cannot come to grips with feeling on the sidelines, not getting anything from her grandparents. In her haste she does something that will cost her. GRAMMAR/SPELLING/DIALOGUE - She pulled a crowbar from one of them, and turned and smashed the glass in widescreen TV---missing something She glanced at a zipped DVD case and tossed it in alongside the player. THOUGHTS - I was shocked how far Bree went. How no one notices her stab wounds is just plain luck on her part. Getting the envelop just before she goes off to college was a good twist of events. I felt bad for her family, but not for Bree. Good job showing she had some remorse for what she'd done to her family. Taking back the monetary gift would definitely have made them question why. Write on!   
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