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Review of Leaving  
Review by ~ Aqua ~
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello, Fi ! I am Aqua and the following are only my personal opinions. Ultimately, you and only you can decide what works best for your item.


Well, I think this is one of my methods of making it up to you for missing your birthday and not spoiling you so when I saw the opportunity to review you as part of the Game of Thrones, I took it and here I am! *Bigsmile* So happy belated birthday, girl! I was searching for something to review from your portfolio when this particular poem caught my attention. The title of your poem was very emotional and I wanted to know where the poet was leaving and why she was leaving. The brief description you had for your poem was even more appealing to me because I really like rain and I love it as a setting for something sad, emotional to happen. Therefore, I wanted to know what kind of a 'leaving' poem it might be in the rain.

The beginning stanza of your poem was very interesting as they let the reader feel relieved, unburdened as if they are finally free even though she didn't feel obliged to something. The poem progressed in a very impressive way as I too imagined all the stresses and problems that were once the center of my life going away, giving me a clear path but the uncertainty of which path to follow is blur but all we can do is move on because life doesn't stop ever. I really liked this concept demonstrated to the reader in your poem and that is why my favourite stanza is the last one, I really liked how it evoked emotions of confusion, a little frighten and thrill of adventure as she wants to move forward, into the unknown. The flow of your poem was good, there was no interruption and it was enhanced by the presence of the consistent rhyming scheme used in your poem. Well done!

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