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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Hello, Elfin Dragon-finally published ! I am Aqua and the following are only my personal opinions. Ultimately, you and only you can decide what works best for your item.


What a realistic poem you have here! I have seen patients that suffer from depression and it comes and goes without any warning or prediction. I was searching for something to review for WDC Game of Thrones when I thought of coming over to your portfolio to read something and here I am! I am fond of reading dark poetry and that is why when I saw you had a dark poetry folder, I knew I had to take a peek and then decided to read this one. The title got my attention because depression is a serious psychological disease that haunts a person, comes to him at the most unexpected times and the person, himself, can never understand why he is depressed, causing his mood to be even more bitter.

Although I am not a depressed person or a patient of depression but every one of us has had days like this when we feel down and truth be told, when it happens to me, I get very frustrated and worked up, thinking why I am sad and what the reason might be. The beginning of your work is very good, it is simple but very true and therefore it gets the reader's complete attention, making her read the rest of the poem. You capture the emotions and the situations a person face when he gets depressed perfectly. Even though you know it's temporary and it will go away and yet it feels as if it will never go. The flow of your poem was very good, there was no interruption and the poem was all the more enhanced by the presence of the good rhythm. Well done! Of all the stanza, my favourite was the second and the fouth stanza, they were written beautifully!


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