Plot/story elements:

Did I feel attached to the story or poem?

I feel as if I'm there in the setting of this piece, you describe it so beautifully.


Would I recommend this piece of writing to someone else?

I have never been to the Adriondacks and now I'd love to see Piseco Lake. I bet the foliage is beautiful and the weather is crisp. Many species of birds probably make their home there and I can see them in my mind's eye roosting and flying in the clear blue sky.


Was there a clear purpose to it?

I felt like I was there and would like to see it in person. It sounds amazingly beautiful. I love that you hear a song playing on the breeze. Is it like a lullaby or a sonata? Perhaps it sounds a bit unique. I wonder if you could expand your thought here. Nature poems are so important because they inspire us to be stewards of it.


Glows:

The way you describe the granite boulders paint such a vivid picture. They are pretty gray and solitary.



Grows:

I wonder if you can expand a couple of lines and describe more aspects of the mountains. I bet they have tall peaks and snow caps. I also wonder what are the scents in the air? Are there fires burning or is it a more natural scene? Just some question I had after reading your piece.



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~Tsa~ House of Greyjoy







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