Hello, I am reviewing again for Game of Thrones.
This story was easy to read. I like the fact that you use memory as a story telling setting.
I like the message of your story, and the respect the character shows his grandparents.
The characters were not described at all. I don't know if the main character who was telling the story was male or female. There is an assumption that it would be you as the author, then again it may not be. I don't see what the grandparents look like. I don't see what the house looks like. What sort of car did the main character drive and why were they driving and not the grandparents. The characters are likable just not realisitic because you don't know what they look like. You describe a photo of the grandfather on the dresser but you don't say what service he was in.
I am glad they both found each other on the other side. That part was excellent.
This is a good piece, just needs a little more description. I hope that I have helped. Thank you for sharing. Keep writing.