Hello!Sharon

I just read your another poem "Fate" and I like the words.

I like the subject of this poem and the little rhyming.

Long distance relationship is one of the most challenging things we ever go through. So many people love from afar, never finding the courage to drive the situation. Only fate can tied up the two hearts. Fate creates our destiny and we participate in its unfolding.

In your poem you are telling these by these lines “But fate dealt this hand, there was never a chance; now I'm going country and you like to dance.”

I like the way you wrote this poem.

Keep up the good work, and best of luck with all of your writing.

Happy Writing!

Mina  


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