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Keeping Our Earth Beautiful  [E]
Our World is a beautiful place, let's keep it that way.
by Jeannie
Review by ~ Aqua ~
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello, Jeannie ! I am Aqua and the following are only my personal opinions. Ultimately, you and only you can decide what works best for your item.


There are three reasons I am in your portfolio today. First of all, Happy Birthday Girl! Many happy returns of the day! I hope you are having a blast! In celebration of your birthday, I am here and I chose this particular item to read and review because of it's beautiful theme and the message inside it. I like reading nature items and when I saw this was one of them, I had to read it.

The reader was even more intrigued when she read that it was a message from you to the reader, directly addressing her and informing the reader in a very good manner about Earth Day and the need to save it, to preserve it, to conserve it in the way it is for the future generations. Every one of us needs to be reminded that the place where we live should be cared for. Earth is just like a garden where there are plants, insects, birds and animals. If the garden is dirty, waste thrown there, and not watered, then all the plants will wilt, the life will slowly end and then it will no longer be inhabitable. The starting of your informative article is very good and powerful as you provided an impressive quote about Earth to emphasize your point, right from the beginning.

It is nice to see that schools have added things that contribute to the natural flora in the curriculum like you mentioned in your article. If all of us start by planting a seed, clearing waste and picking up trash from gardens and discharge the waste properly instead of throwing them in water, there would be a huge difference. But the thing is, we start and go on like a day, two, ten and then we forget. I know it happens with me but I try to do things, help keep the environment clean and green in any way I can. As a student, I don't make throw any kind of garbage in gardens or green areas and we have a good lawn in our hope as well.

Your article was extremely informative because I didn't know who brought forward the idea of Earth Day and how it all began. Thank you for that! I found no error in your article.

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