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Alone In The Dark  [E]
What if you're alone. And dark.
by GERVIC 🐉 House Targaryen
Review of Alone In The Dark  
Review by ~ Aqua ~
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hello, GERVIC 🐉 House Targaryen ! I am Aqua and the following are only my personal opinions. Ultimately, you and only you can decide what works best for your item.


I was searching for something to review from your portfolio in your poetry folder when this particular poem caught my attention and I wanted to know what kind of a poem you had. I love reading dark poems, with a dark, personal theme and reading your title, it gave the reader the impression that perhaps it would be something about you in the dark, your emotions. Another thought that came to her mind was that perhaps you had used 'alone in the dark' as a metaphor meaning a situation or time of your life where you are all alone and there is no one else to help you, to pick you up and for the poet, all hope is lost.

The beginning of your poem is good, there is suspense generated in the reader's mind as she wonders what kind of a poem it might be. The vocabulary you had used was simple yet very effective in allowing the reader to close her eyes and imagine sitting alone in a dark room, watching a lamp that is turned off with the wind. The more I think about it, the poem I mean, the more I am persuaded that you have used it in the metaphorical way but then again, that is just my opinion. Because otherwise, the poem alone seems kind of incomplete. The flow of your poem was good, the first stanza and its lines were my favourite.

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