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Review of Blink!  
Review by ~ Aqua ~
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello, Cassie Kat ! I am Aqua and the following are only my personal opinions. Ultimately, you and only you can decide what works best for your item.


Since the last time I was here in your portfolio, I enjoyed all your blinks a lot and when I was searching for something to review for WDC Game of thrones, I decided to come here again and read more of your awesome blinks and now here I am! The title of your story is very good because it is unique, intriguing and gives away absolutely no idea or clue to the reader and to allow her a hint to guess what the story may be about. There was no short description so I knew I had to read it.

The prompt you had was good, it was similar to the prompts given in contests that feature inanimate objects and ask the participants to give them real emotions, feelings and dialogue, treat them like a real person. The prompt was everything that the reader needed to understand why the story was titled the way it is and what it might be about. After reading your work, the reader agreed the choice of the title.

The beginning of your story was good and interesting because you refer to the stereotypes and how they are always wrong. Your story was full of humor that had me amused, entertained and laugh at different points throughout the entire story. I wish I had a pet fish like that! Very witty and sarcastic, loved him! It was a good choice to take a fish and then refer the human thoughts about them having little memory and being odd with mouths open etc. I really liked how you added the last line in your story because being a biology student, it came off to me as quite something unexpected and though fish are our ancestors in the vertebrates, in fact, they aren't as primitive as we think they are! *Laugh* Well done! The flow of your blink was perfect, there was no interruption and I found no error in your work.

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