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Hello, Cassie Kat ! I am Aqua and the following are only my personal opinions. Ultimately, you and only you can decide what works best for your item.


Well, well, this was something quite unexpected! Like the last story I read from this collection, the title of this story too didn't give away anything to the reader as she wondered, tons of ideas coming to her mind, as to what the story could be about and why it is titled the way it is. Unlike the other stories you had written, this one was very different and 'live in the moment' one, a very sad moment that is which made me want to cry at the end of it.

The starting of your story was good and intriguing as it raised curiosity and lots of questions in the reader's mind as she wondered what relationship was between the two of them and where they were traveling. From the story, the reader takes a wild guess that perhaps he is a stranger who met her when she was journeying and they became good, fast friends. But the girl, she has more feelings and want to be more than just being friends with him and yet she lets go of her desire all for him, to let him go and fulfil his dreams. It gave kind of, you can say, like an insight to the author's personality that she will keep things to herself and even if she wants something, she will not say it and will keep it suppressed. You seem like a very kind person, Cassie. The flow of your story was good, there was no interruption and I enjoyed your little story that made me happy when I saw both of them spending time together and at the same time very emotional at the thought of them separating and that she would never get to tell him her true feelings. *Heart*

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