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 | The Work of my Father's Hands  [E] How my father tells me he loves me with out saying a word.  |
| (5.0)| Review brought to you by: "Game of Thrones" by Gaby ~ Just tired  PLOT - I loved this story and the significance of your fathers hard work throughout his life that shows his love for you. What a wonderful thing to realize and be able to share with generations to come. SETTING - Great descriptions of how he worked, the smells that comfort you and yet can be offensive to others. Very vivid details of the woodwork, where they are now, what they've been through and how they take up from one child to the next, all hand made by your father. CHARACTERS - I am assuming you are writing about yourself and your dad. It's a great little piece that packs so much love and passion. He was passionate about his work and expressed that in everything he created. GRAMMAR/SPELLING/DIALOGUE - Though it is pungent and unpleasant to some, it makes me feel warm and content<--missing period THOUGHTS - So many times the labor of love is missed, only to be realized when it's too late. I didn't find that here. You captured glimpses of your father's love well, and appreciated the things he did through his creativity, and then through yours in this short story. Very heartwarming. Fantastic job. Write on!  
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