*Magnify*
SPONSORED LINKS
BY ONLINE AUTHORS
Printed from https://www.writing.com/main/my_feedback/action/view/id/4244205
Review #4244205
Viewing a review of: {citem:}
Review of  
Review by ~ Aqua ~
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: | (5.0)
Access:  Public | Hide Review (?)
 
*Shield6* A "Game of Thrones"  *Sun* Martell *Sun* Review *Shield6*
A Review from "SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP" 


Hello, Elfin Dragon-finally published ! I am Aqua and the following are only my personal opinions. Ultimately, you and only you can decide what works best for your item.


I was looking for something else to review from your portfolio when this caught my eye in your stories folder. I really like reading friendship poems and stories and the title got my attention. I wanted to know what thoughts you had for friendship and how you had expressed it in your story. Reading the title alone made the reader think of you as a very friendly, frank and a sweet person and it creates warm, fuzzy feeling inside of her. Friendship is a gift, a blessing that everyone should have and use. Having friends in our lives bring a different kind of colour and change, they are with you through the good and the bad events in your life, always supporting you, giving you a shoulder to cry on or to use as a support.

What a beautiful essay you have here that perfectly sums up what friendship is and how think of it. I have to say I agree with all of what you said. It is extremely hard to lose a friend and not because of the distance but because of a misunderstanding or some fight between them. I have had rare times like those and I have to say it makes me feel bad and sad at the same time. Every one wants to be loved and to have a friend and yet they don't want to be hurt and therefore don't open themselves up. But what you have here, it gives the reader an insight in your personality and what a soft hearted person you are. It also gives the reader a lesson to be nice and value friends more than she does at the moment and be open to them, let them in, and love them.

*Shield1* Thank you for sharing your work with us! *Shield2*
Write On!
** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **




*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
   *CheckG* You responded to this review 08/22/2016 @ 5:06pm EDT
Printed from https://www.writing.com/main/my_feedback/action/view/id/4244205