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Of Water  [13+]
A poem about water, but it's not what you expect.
by elizjohn
Review of Of Water  
Review by ~ Aqua ~
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Hello, elizjohn ! I am Aqua and the following are only my personal opinions. Ultimately, you and only you can decide what works best for your item.


I was searching for something to review from your portfolio for WDC Game of Thrones war when this particular poem which was also in the highlights of your portfolio caught my attention and I wanted to read it. There were two reasons why I chose to read and review this. The cover photo of your work was very soothing, calm and I really like water so I wanted to see what kind of a poem you had on water. Also, the short description you had provided the reader with was very interesting and seemed like a challenge and I had to read it.

You have taken such a simple, normal and casual thing and transformed it into something so beautiful, something so different and unique. You are right when you said in the short description that it is definitely not the poem and the theme I expected in your poem. The way you have written a poem about water with reference to the water in the river or the ocean, the water in the tears, the water used in sanitation, and cleaning both metaphorically and literally. It was a beautiful poem that captivated me. The flow of your poem was good, there was no interruption and my favourite part of your poem was the part about the rain, absolutely loved it!

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