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What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Cow*You visited me with a nice review recently, so here I am to read and review. I decided to look at your Game of Thrones folder for some reading.

What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* I think you have engaged me as a reader very well with your story of a young woman seeking revenge on the fellow who has rejected her. At first, I am thinking this is about a lethal sort of revenge, but it seems to be more of a taste of salt for the boy and his family.

I love your description of how she approaches the family home and how she is very keen to what is surrounding her. I could sense her rapid heart beat as the moment of truth drew near!

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

*Thumbsup*I like the way you have her listening outside the window to what is happening with the family. Her revenge seems to be colored with regret over the loss of someone she cared for. Still, she is single minded in carrying out her plan and I think you take the reader on a suspenseful ride, seeing the world from her outside the window, looking in - eyes.

Very creative!

HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

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Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time....

"Avoiding Toothless Rabid Bullies & Such" 
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