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What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

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What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* I think that you have done a nice job with the prompt by making the app that is downloaded a sort of GPS with a mind of it's own. It tells Sgt. Hopper where to go before he is ready to be told. This makes him suspicious and rightly so, I would say.

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

*Thumbsup*I liked your main character's solution to the dilemma of the insistent phone. Taking out the battery is such a simple thing, but it makes so much sense.

I enjoyed the back and forth dialogue between your characters and I thought your story was clever and original. Nice work!

HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

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