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 Pseudo App  [ASR]
I find a most unusual app on my phone.
by Jatog the Green
Review of Pseudo App  
Review by ♥Hooves♥
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* I think that every relationship starts out this way with the lure and making someone feel on top of the world, that they are the victor, the king who can do no wrong. This app makes this guy feel like a genius.

Your rhyme was good and I especially liked that you kept every line to eight syllables. I loved that, actually.

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

*Thumbsup*The whole thing was great and I especially liked your ending:

"Where app had come from, I don’t know;
but now it’s gone—that’s apropos.
That smart phone app was asinine,
like places where the light don’t shine."

This is timely as it reminded me of that Pokemon Go stuff where people walk around staring at their phone and not paying attention to what they are doing. A generation of sheep who follow the leader has ensued.

Wonderful poem!

HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

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