Hello, I am reviewing for Game of Thrones. This poem is encouraging and peaceful.
This piece was easy to read through. I did not understand the information at the end about this being Quatrain in tetrameter ending with a couplet.
Reading through it was easy and light. I like the fact that you have a prayer in poem form. there is good rhythm in this. Your word choice fit the subject matter.
The words flowed seamlessly. A recommendation I would make is in stanza 2 change the first Shelter to maybe Cover or another synonym. It seems to me there is a little too much -elter in that stanza. In stanza 3 you have a single tide and multiple tables. I recommend changing to multiple tides and tables.
The rhyme fit what you wanted to say and the word choice was matched. I like the imagery you used for God being our shelter and keeping us safe when we are going through rough times.
this poem reminds me to turn to God when I am in a situation that I don't know what to do about.
Grammar and punctuation...it was consistent. I am not good with poetry grammar.
This is a good piece. I enjoyed reading it. Keep writing.


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