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Reaching for a Rainbow  [13+]
A poem about recovery.
by Kit of House Lannister
Review by ~ Aqua ~
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Hello, Kit of House Lannister ! I am Aqua and the following are only my personal opinions. Ultimately, you and only you can decide what works best for your item.


I had meant to come and read something from your portfolio and when I was searching for something to review for WDC Game of Thrones, I took the opportunity of coming here. I was browsing through poems in your poetry folder when this caught my attention. The title of your poem was very interesting as the reader got positive, hopeful vibes from the title and made her want to read it. There were a lot of ideas that came to her mind by reading the title like finding something good in the middle of a bad situation, or searching for a happy ending or something similar. The short description of your work gave further idea to the reader what to expect in the poem and here I am!

The opening stanza of your work is nice, slow and sets quite a good tone in the reader's mind. It made the reader feel as if she had been in a bad situation but now slowly the situation was improving as I took steps slowly. The second stanza was another well written stanza as I liked how you made the reader feel trapped in a closed tunnel and then at the end of the tunnel is a light, a hope, a new beginning for myself. Your poem is very beautiful, a slow progress at getting out and recovering from all the bad that might have happened to you in the past. You remind the reader of a very important lesson which is to keep the past, past and move forward into the future. After reading the poem, the title of the poem you have fits perfectly for the contest, well done! The flow of your poem was good, there was no interruption and it was enhanced by the presence of the rhythm and the rhyming used. I have no suggestions for you work.

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