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| Review brought to you by: "Game of Thrones" by Gaby ~ Just tired  Rhythm/Rhyme: Nothing slowed this poem down from one stanza to the next as you went through the things love can do. Summary: A free poem about the power of love in all its glory as it brings good things into your life and also the heartache that forces us to learn from our mistakes and move forward, whether we want to or not. Critique: You did a good job describing how love isn't something that you can smell, or taste, but is rather something you feel deep inside. It lifts you up and gives you hope. When it falls apart, it can be like a tornado tearing everything apart. I liked how you took a positive about love and highlighted it, and then the next line showed the opposite effect it can have on someone. You always went further and showed that just because a someone you love may leave, there is still the chance for another love, a new love to come into your life and fill you with hope once again. You pointed out that it's also a learning experience, how we grow from one relationship to the next, hopefully not making the same mistakes from the past, but learning from them. Nice job. Write on!  
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