Hello!

I just read your poem. I like the story in this poem. I read some of your poems and I would say that the poems you wrote here are really beautiful.

God made this beautiful world for us and we the human rules over the land and the sea. But we only explore 5% of this vast sea. Science and technology going too fast that may be one day we will explore this mysterious ocean.

And this poem perfectly follow the prompt “The sea, once it casts its spell, holds on in its net of wonder forever.” This poem is beautiful not only in the language but also the image you painted here. The rhyming scheme (a,x,a,x) makes this poem more interesting. I like the lines

The ocean, the sea
she will be my home.
Her nets have been cast,
her waves I will roam.


The tone is good. The flow of your poem flows like floating sea waves.


Happy Writing!

Mina  


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