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Review by Shaye
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Hi Dragon is hiding ,

I am Lorraine and I am reviewing your piece "Invalid Item"  today in affiliation with "Simply Positive Review Forum " .

Title: As you said in the forum. The title really does say it all. Well, mostly. Maybe a better title would be, "The Talk About Anything Within 18+ But Don't Trash Talk WDCers". Then again, that title would've been too long, so yours seems to suit!

Thoughts and Suggestions: This forum would definitely benefit some publicity. I know you only released it a few days ago, but the trick to keeping a forum active is to keep it in people's minds. You need to advertise, and then participating yourself usually helps. That's one of the reasons the Teen Forum isn't doing too well right now. None of us are really given it a second thought. Although, that does remind me of it!

It's a good idea for a forum. I'm not sure how many times it's been done before. I guess this is a bit like a General Discussion form, or a politer version of "Invalid Item"  *Bigsmile* It's probably been done, but has it been successful before? That's what you've got to do to set this out from the rest.

You said when you announced it you'd pretty it up later, and that might help. Maybe an eye-catching image and some fancy ML will attract people?

I've added it to my favourites now anyway, so if I want to talk about something, I'll stop by!

Spelling/Grammar: No errors spotted.

Closing Thoughts: Thanks for hosting this fun forum. I hope more people stop by so you can get a real conversation going soon.

Lorraine


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