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Hi Dream ~★~ Justly ,

I am Lorraine and I am reviewing your piece "Invalid Item"  today in affiliation with "Simply Positive Review Forum " .

Title: As someone that enjoys horror and loves Halloween, I just had to stop by when I spotted this! The title is enticing, and much more creative than something like "Horror Crossword", which is along the lines of what I would've gone for. *Laugh*

Thoughts and Suggestions: So, I'm stumped. Not that difficult to be honest. I'm not the best at crosswords. I'm surprised I've only got one left. Please, put me out of my misery. 3 Down? Please! I know it's going to be really obvious when I know it. *Rolleyes* And hey, my inability doesn't mean I'm going to rate you down, this totally deserves 5 stars.

There's always room for suggestions though. You're awesome at creating pretty cool looking things with emoticons and ML. I've seen the dragons and fire throughout the games. So, where's that ingenuity here? Spice up the item with some emoticons, colour. Make it look halloween-y. I know you can do it. *Wink*

Spelling/Grammar: No errors spotted here.

Closing Thoughts: Thanks for this very entertaining crossword. I thought for a second I was actually going to finish a crossword. Maybe I need one built especially for me around something I'm an expert on. I'll have to go and make one myself for that, I think. *Laugh* That's the only way I'm even going to know and get all the answers right!

Lorraine


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