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Review of Purification  
Review by ~ Aqua ~
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello, Sara♥Jean ! I am Aqua and the following are only my personal opinions. Ultimately, you and only you can decide what works best for your item.


When I was searching for something to review from your portfolio in your poetry folder, this caught my attention. There were two main reasons for choosing to read and review. The first was that I love reading about nature poems especially ones that have rain featured in them, be it a story set in raining, or emotional poem in rain. I love it. Therefore, when I read the short description of your work, I knew I had to read it. The second reason is because the idea of raining as more than what it is appeals a lot to me. For example, you used rain here to show something other than nature: purification. I feel the same way about rain at some times and it's a nice feeling. This is why I wanted to know what kind of a purification poem you had written here.

Your poem was well written, beautiful. The flow of your poem was very good, the rhythm of your poem was smooth. There was no interruption and when I read it out loud, it flew smoothly. The vocabulary you had used in your poem was very strong, it was extremely in conveying the emotions to the reader as I felt myself refreshed, a new change in me and hoping for a better tomorrow, to a new start. I loved how you used the rain drops as teardrops in your poem and the thunder a sign of anguish and pain. It was very impressive. My favourite stanza was the first one, I really liked it! *Heart*

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