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Haiku Of Color  [E]
Colorful Diversity
by Geoff
Review of Haiku Of Color  
Review by ~ Aqua ~
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello, Geoff ! I am Aqua and the following are only my personal opinions. Ultimately, you and only you can decide what works best for your item.


I was searching for something to review from your portfolio when this particular poem caught my attention and I wanted to know what kind of a poem you had written on colours. The title of your work was very interesting because it gave the reader the impression that perhaps it would be a haiku about colours due to which I was intrigued to know how you could explain and write about colours in three lines. The reader had thought that perhaps it would be an overall, general poem about colours and therefore I didn't expect separate stanza for different colours. It was a good surprise for the reader as she admired how you did justice to each colour *Wink*.

Just by reading the title of your work alone I could imagine rainbow, so many different colours and situations in my mind so I wondered what you might have inside. I loved how you began your poem and mentioned the different colours in the form of nature and environment present around us. The flow of your poem was very good, the idea of using more than one haiku was very interesting and lovely. It worked quite well for your poem. The vocabulary you had chosen for your poem was more than perfect, it was very beautiful and the poem painted very vivid, beautiful images of sunset, sunrise, the lightening, the night sky, the rainbow - everything was perfect! My favourite stanza was the eighth and the sixth ones, I absolutely loved the one about sunset and sunrise and how those colour change everyday. Perfect!

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