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Review of Let Her Eat Cake!  
Review by ~ Aqua ~
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello, OOT™ ! I am Aqua and the following are only my personal opinions. Ultimately, you and only you can decide what works best for your item.


What a fun, different kind of a story you have here! I was searching for something to review from your portfolio when this story caught my attention in the 30 Day Image contest folder. The title of your story was very interesting and gave the reader an impression as if this were some kind of a funny story with a comedy and an amusing twist in it. The title made me laugh so I had to see what the story was about.

The short description you had provided the reader with made her even more intrigued as she wanted to know why Anna ould get the cake earlier and why would she eat it. The way you have written your story was very amusing and no matter how many times we say it is unbelievable, it is actually believable and realistic and I can imagine how the story might have turned out. The beginning of your work was very good, it made the reader feel happy, lifted to know that she had achieved her target of fitting in her wedding dress. The idea, and the plot behind our story was very interesting because weddings are very motivating for girls to get slimmer and become even more beautiful. Therefore, I can relate and understand how Anna must have felt and wanted to become fit. Lovely idea!

However, the ending wasn't what I had expected! I had this funny image in my mind where the cake was actually calling out to her and then she gave in to her desires! *Laugh* I don't like to do dieting and don't do it either and I guess the reason behind is this *Laugh*. The flow of your story was good, there was no interruption and the characters are very believable. There were no errors that I could spot in your work.

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