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| (4.5)  A "Game of Thrones"  Martell Review A Review from "SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP" Hello, OOT™  ! I am Aqua and the following are only my personal opinions. Ultimately, you and only you can decide what works best for your item.I was searching for something to review from your portfolio when this particular poem caught my attention and I wanted to know what Celia was doing with the knife. The title of your poem was interesting, it was just like the story I read before where you wrote the title of the poem the same as the main character in your writing. It adds a good impression on the reader. The short description was very intriguing and it made the reader wonder the same question and all kinds of thoughts ran in her mind as I wondered if she was going to hurt herself or try to commit suicide. It didn't cross my mind even once that she would be trying to kill someone else. The flow of your poem was good, there was a lot of suspense in it as the reader wondered how and what she was doing with the blade. The way you had written about memories and pain coming back to her made me feel sad and sure that she was going to hurt herself but it was only in the last stanza did the reader find out that Celia had killed the person who had hurt her and destroyed her emotionally. The vocabulary you used in your poem was very strong, and vivid. well done!  Thank you for sharing your work with us!  Write On! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **  My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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