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Review of IMAGINATION LOST  
Review by ~ Aqua ~
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello, Journey Back to Writing! ! I am Aqua and the following are only my personal opinions. Ultimately, you and only you can decide what works best for your item.


I was searching for something to review from your portfolio for the WDC Game of Thrones and this particular poem caught my attention. I had read poems before that had the theme where the poet discussed about how we grow up, face the bitter reality and no longer can find solace in the fairytales, the stories, the fiction because we know they no longer exist. Sometimes the poet go and wonder about the children, so carefree and imaginative having no idea about growing up and how envious he is of the child. I have always loved this idea and when I read the title of your poem, I knew it was something similar to the poems I mentioned above and I knew I had to come and take a peek at it .

As the reader had expected, the poem was similar to the theme she had read before but this one was presented in a very unique, beautiful way. The way your story began had the reader captivated and completely absorbed in your work as she continued to read on. The flow of your poem was very good, there was no interruption and the vocabulary you had used in your work was smooth, simple yet very effective in conveying strong, positive and happy emotions to the reader throughout the poem. When the reader reached the last stanza, she was disappointed and sad because of the way how the sudden pleasure, the delight ended when she realised it was all in the childhood, a fiction, a piece of mind. *Heart*

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