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Review of Candy Apple Ken  
Review by Starling
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Title of Work: : Candy Apple ken (Fiction, comedy)
Author of Work: : DollarDays is painting
Date: : July 31, 2016

Plot:
Johnny's shift is about to end when a strange customer pulls up to the drive thru window

Scene/Setting:
Johnny is in the service window of a fast food restaurant, called Fish King. A Dolly Parton look alike pulls up in a candy apple red Corvette and orders a small burger, diet coke and fries. He makes a wise crack asking the lady if the blowup Ken doll sitting beside her would like anything. She tells him no because Ken is not feeling real good at the moment. Johnny tells her it has to be specially grilled, and asks her to pull up the spot near the front door, to wait. The ladies does as she is asked.

Johnny delivers the meal. The lady asks him if he ever played with Ken dolls when he was young. He tells her no, but he did have a set of Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtle dolls. When he goes to walk away, he trips and ends up on the sidewalk. He sees a bright light and feels electricty travel through his body. When he comes to, he finds he has been turned into a Teenage Muntant Ninja Turtle blowup doll. This is when he realizes the Ken's dolls eyes are not blank but terrified. He is stuffed into the trunk of the corvette.

Characters:
Johnny - server at window
Patrice - manager of restaurant
Lady in Corvette
Blow up Ken Doll

Suggestions:
Oh, my... this is just totally off the wall. I will admit, I can see it happening in another universe, but I probably shouldn't be admitting that. It gave me shivers and a chuckle all at the same time.

Character Count: 1,370 (tags = 173 Characters above this point)
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