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Hello, OOT™ ! I am Aqua and the following are only my personal opinions. Ultimately, you and only you can decide what works best for your item.


I always looked at the first few items and folders in your portfolio and went in them to read and review your work. But just a few minutes ago was the first time when I scrolled to the bottom of the page when I was searching for something to read and review in your portfolio and this collection caught my attention and I wondered why I had never read any reviewed anything from it before. Intrigued by the stories and poems you might have here, here I am!

I chose to read and review this poem because of the interesting title. I wanted to know what kind of a poem you had written on the cupid's arrow because so many ideas were roaming in my head on the theme. The starting of your poem is very good, it grabs the reader's attention immediately as she wants to know more about how love entered your life, even when you weren't looking for it, and how you feel about it. Love is a wonderful thing that can come at any time in your life, even at times when you know you aren't looking for it and yet you fall in love. Sometimes you feel it troublesome to have fallen at the time when it wasn't desired but at other times, it becomes a pleasure, a good part of life that changes you, just like you have mentioned in your poem.

I loved the idea behind it and know that love changed you that from a pessimistic person who didn't look forward to the new day, now looked forward to the new tomorrow everyday because you had fallen love and had someone beside you. It really delighted me. The flow of your poem was very good, there was no interruption and it was quite smooth when I read it out loud. The vocabulary you had used in your work was very effective and simple to send happy, positive emotions to the reader. Out of the three stanza, I really loved the first one. Wonderful job!

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