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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Hello Mari McKee . How are you doing? I'm Charlie and I'm here reviewing for "a very Wodehouse challenge today. My challenge requires a couple reviews of cat-related items, and I think this one fits in quite well. *Crazy* Thanks for sharing your writing with us. I hope this review finds you well. *Smile*


Title/General Thoughts/Subject Matter:
Uh-oh! I think I might be a crazy cat lady. *Rolling* I chose to read this item because I love cats and everyone always tells me I have too many. I don't think you can be a crazy cat person if you're married though, right? I think there's some sort of rule there. Unless you love your cats more than your spouse... Hmm, where there's a will, there's a way! *Laugh*


What Worked: I love how you set this up as a serious medical article. It's like self-diagnosing yourself with a genuine illness. A lot of these were so relatable for cat owners, especially the first one! Yes, we do communicate with our cats because they have so many different meows and ways of letting you know what they want. My least favorite body language moves are the ones that involve claws.

I love this part:
If you have more cats than you do windowsills or if you can hear your cats upstairs chasing each other, sounding like a herd of elephants trampling in panic, you have too many cats.

That's a good rule of thumb. More cats than windowsills? Yep, you have too many! *Rolling* I love the ending of this too... "God help you." Hilarious.


Technical Issues/Suggestions: Grammar/spelling all look great here. I didn't notice any typos or anything I can nitpick in that area.

I would suggest making this into a list as that is sort of the setup right now anyway. I think a list of "Signs you're a crazy cat lady" would draw in more readers because it would be broken up a little better. I'd also suggest bumping this up from an E-rating because it mentions a couple non-e things.


Final Thoughts: Overall, I thought this was a lot of fun! I enjoyed reading it and seeing where I fit on the spectrum of Crazy Cat Lady. You can still be a boy and be a crazy cat lady, right? *Wink* Thanks again for sharing with us!


Best wishes,


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